~Song~

"Unknown"
Riva Del Garda
I flew past
the open havens, whispering waters,
gasping for breath
in gorgeous greens-
The wind unfurled the unknown song lost
in the cacophony!

The 
idle dwellers
failed to notice
the astounding beauty of
Me!

I added a lantern poem at the end just for a bit of twist :)

7 comments:

  1. The scenery around Garda is so lovely! We spent 2 consecutive holidays there, one at Bardolino in the south and the other at Torbole in the north (when our son was small :) )

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  2. i like finding the song in the chaos of the day and all its people...
    and how often do we fail to notice the beauty in most things...

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    1. The discovery of this silent song can give us a new life a different type of joy! :)

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  3. Gorgeous -- a wonderful interpretation of the photo -- and the lanterne at the end is magnificent :)

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